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Sunday, September 1, 2019

100 Waifus Read and Edited for the 12th time:

Setting endless new records, I've read and edited my enormous 'In Another World With 100 Waifus' book for a 12th time within the last seven months.  The last few edits included fixing an accounting error, deleting a comma which had no reason to exist, and rephrasing some awkwardly worded sentences, none of which change the plot but do transmit my meaning better.

After combing over this book twelve times, I'm confident no further edits will be necessary.  Someday I hope to improve the quality of the Precure children via the addition of characters from future seasons, but obviously that isn't something I can edit now since the new seasons don't exist yet.  Everything else is working as intended.  I can now read this book without ever stopping to think it could have been written better some other way.  Nor are there any technical mistakes like the start of a sentence not being capitalized that might make the book look amateurish.

I've done everything I could.  The book is essentially perfect, which is to be expected from the best book ever written.

Just consider what this book has to offer:

1)  It honors the 1,000 greatest characters in fiction.
2)  It has super hot sex scenes.
3)  It has super romantic love scenes.
4)  It builds a civilization from scratch all the way to the stars.
5)  It has a realistic, believable God that anyone would want to worship.
6)  It has a new ten commandments that could create heaven on Earth if followed.
7)  It has an ideal male protagonist anyone could look up to and aspire towards.
8)  It's chock full of cuteness and quips.
9)  It spans over a century of time, 100 characters, and three hundred pages of epic storytelling.
10)  It smashes all taboos in the pursuit and successful realization of true happiness.

The only problem at this point is the readers themselves.  If they are not intelligent, knowledgeable, or sensible enough to agree with what I'm saying, they'll likely hate the story anyway, despite all ten of these amazing features, through no fault of the book's own.  There's nothing I can do about that.

Nevertheless, I want as many people as possible to have a chance to read this life transforming masterpiece, so I'll provide the links to all the sections of the story yet again:

https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/02/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-1.html

https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/02/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-2.html

https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/02/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-3.html

https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/03/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-4.html

https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/05/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-7.html

2 comments:

Proximity Symbol said...

I've been following your writings since my discovery of you on The Road Less Traveled. You are a master storyteller and an amazing commentator of truth. Thank You.

Diamed said...

No, thank you! You've provided me with the one thing I was lacking -- external validation!