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Friday, February 15, 2019

Proofreading:

I'm about halfway through my re-reading of 'In Another World With 100 Waifus,' as I've been proofreading minor spelling and grammar errors, as well as minor errors of details.  With each edit my story becomes more professional and easy to read.

Though this is partially work, it's also just for pleasure.  The book is so fantastic that even reading it for the third time in the space of a week I'm just swept away by the descriptions and the dialogue.  It feels so real, so lively, so true, that I can picture really living there.  Every scene is crystal clear in my head as though it had really happened.

I encourage everyone to take advantage of my now even more proofread copy of 'In Another World With 100 Waifus,' just like I have.  It's so rewarding -- in terms of lovey-dovey heartwarming moments, political insights, philosophical proofs, humor, wonderful easter egg call outs to the source material I liberally draw from, and as pure ecchi fan service.  This book brought me to tears in the writing, simply because the heartfelt emotions my characters expressed in their dialogue were so naked, vulnerable and honest with each other.  Their emotions are so much stronger than what you can come across in everyday life, and it just sweeps you away with them.

I don't want to spoil all the plot twists, but there's even dramatic moments that will leave you on the edge of your seats.  It isn't all just fun and games (though it mostly is!).

The book is almost biblical in the sense of its zealous attention to lineages and names.  But I think there is power in names, in recognizing and honoring the various characters across fiction and giving them a special place in this new world.  And it's simply fascinating who was chosen as the names of the wives' children, and why they were assigned to that wife in particular as opposed to some other wife.  The index of names at the end that arranges them by franchise as well as by parent gives everyone the tools they need to learn about all the great characters referenced in the book, and all the names are worth learning about, because they all represent really wonderful people.

The story delivers on every foreshadowed promise and yet still has a twist at the end that leaves you wanting more.  It's simply the perfect ending.

There's no character more relatable than my protagonist.  What man wouldn't choose to live like him, given the opportunity?  And how easy it is to join him for the ride!  All he did was dare to dream.  His devastating honesty, his lack of any hypocritical pretense or virtue-signalling pose, his unapologetic selfishness, all of it is such a breath of fresh air in the stifling conformity of everyone having to pretend all the time that they care so much about 'muh feelz,' 'the children,' 'propriety,' 'life is sacred,' 'ethics,' and all the school marm lectures about what you can and cannot do, can and cannot think, can and cannot want, even in fiction, the censorship just follows and bears down on everyone everywhere -- everyone but him, and everywhere but here!

I can only sit back and marvel at myself.  I'm the best author in the world and my books are the most interesting out there.  Whether it's fiction or non-fiction, there's no one I'd rather be reading than myself.  Is there any other book I've reread so often, so quickly as this one???  The answer is no, the entertainment value in this book is more explosive than anything else I've come across in my life.  It's so addictive I just keep coming back for more.

It's tough finding anything to be optimistic about here in the real world, but this book is different.  It's set in another world, and it's just absolutely overflowing with hope, joy, light and love.  It's the exact opposite of real life and better in every way.  Practically anything I write about concerning Earth is going to be brimming with negative energy -- disgust, hatred, contempt, loathing, dread, despair, anger and just plain boredom.  Anything I write about Eden (the name of the other world) is brimming with emotions of the exact opposite sort, excitement, energy, hope, love, admiration, appreciation, gratitude, sympathy, empathy, understanding, affirmation, unity and belonging.  There's even just outright worship.

It's not just an alternate world. . .it's more like an alternate mode of being.  When you're reading this story, you can become an entirely different person, who feels entirely different things, feelings you might have thought weren't even possible anymore.

It's easy to get started, just click on this link:  https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/02/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-1.html

Once you reach the bottom, just move on to the next section:  https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/02/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-2.html

And then to see the ending, move on to the third and final section:  https://diamed-the-road-less-traveled.blogspot.com/2019/02/in-another-world-with-100-waifus-part-3.html

I've been posting a flurry of posts, including formatting changes to other books, so perhaps people have found it just too difficult to find the right link for the start of this book.  So here's the chance for it to be easy as pie -- just click on the link and let the journey begin.

Meanwhile, I fully approve of Trump's decision to fund the government for the rest of the year while also building his promised border wall via the declaration of a national emergency.  It's an ingenious maneuver and will absolutely be upheld by the Supreme Court in the face of any legal challenges.  (This is the benefit of having a 5-4 supreme court majority, which is also thanks to Trump's bold leadership and refusal to back down when Kavanaugh was smeared with ridiculous, vile lies.)

Like most of the country I'm feeling very good about Trump right now.  He's got near record approval ratings, many polls have him above 50%.  Obama rarely polled that well.  And compared to Congress, that regularly polls at like 14% approval, it's just a joke.  He is the most trusted leader in America, in the entire free world.  He has the country's pulse and he reflects their views more closely than anyone else, while also nudging them in the right direction when they're wrong about something through careful and convincing arguments.  Trump, Trump, Trump!

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